My favorite season is fall because , for me , autumn is the most beautiful of the seasons of the year .The air fresh the leaves are beautiful colored , and the smell of the fireplaces in the early fall mornings reaming the winter is coming.
My favorite season is fall because , for me , autumn is the most beautiful of the seasons of the year .The air fresh the leaves are beautiful colored , and the smell of the fireplaces in the early fall mornings reaming the winter is coming. Rainy and cold days to spend the next day to enjoying the warm day . Days on which you want to take a walk in the parks and kick the leaves that the wind is throwing your way. I like to see the trees full of golden , red & leaves. I also like to celebrate the day of Halloween, the day of the dead, and the day of Thanksgiving.It is a spectacular time! :) Thats why my favorite season is Fall.
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I agree with you that fall is a great season. Right now, the mornings are cold, but the afternoons are still mild, and the trees look striking with all the colors.
Corrections: The air is fresh, the leaves are beautifully colored, and the smell of the fireplaces in the early fall mornings means that winter is coming.
Also, watch the position of periods - there should be one space after them, before the next word starts.
My favorite season is fall because , for me , autumn is the most beautiful of the seasons of the year .The air fresh the leaves are beautiful colored , and the smell of the fireplaces in the early fall mornings reaming the winter is coming. Rainy and cold days to spend the next day to enjoying the warm day . Days on which you want to take a walk in the parks and kick the leaves that the wind is throwing your way. I like to see the trees full of golden , red & leaves. I also like to celebrate the day of Halloween, the day of the dead, and the day of Thanksgiving.It is a spectacular time! :) Thats why my favorite season is Fall.
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That's ok - I can show you how to edit the post. You can talk to me after class tomorrow. :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with you that fall is a great season. Right now, the mornings are cold, but the afternoons are still mild, and the trees look striking with all the colors.
Corrections:
The air is fresh, the leaves are beautifully colored, and the smell of the fireplaces in the early fall mornings means that winter is coming.
Also, watch the position of periods - there should be one space after them, before the next word starts.